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vr 3.00
2008-02-16
Then I thought my Inuyasha fiction should have garnered enough of those special fans to fill a Hall of Flames. With bestiality and necrophelia and raping-through-clothes and penis-tattoo-fetishes...it's inflicted a lot of damage to a lot of people. And then, again, my plans were foiled.
Now I'm forced to post positive reviews as filler. Curses! Curses!
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If it was up to you, Abraxas, you would put Tygra and Lion-O together. So you don't get a say. -- A Troll, flame from a chatroom, 1st part |
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Yeah, but I don't write the wierd fics.... -- A Troll, flame from a chatroom, 2nd part |
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The storyine they have for the darker series - from what it sounds like - will be much more defined and better researched/written than any of Abraxas's stories ever were. These folks are experienced, professional comic book writers, after all - you'll have to admit there's just no comparison between professionalism and amateurism. ;) -- A Troll, flame from a messageboard/group |
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You are one twisted individual, you know that? I read your Thundercat fic a long time ago and it still haunts me. You ever consider therapy? Stuff like this doesn't come from nowhere, it always has a seed in reality. Are you capable of anything that DOESN'T involve mutilation and Bride of the Re-animator stuff? -- Neuma, Against Life |
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Holy shit! I have never before read anything that instilled within me such a sense of horror and terror. Even though horror is a negative feeling, the extent to which this story made me feel it is great. Not many stories chill you to the bone or make you have to repress a shudder like this one did to me. While reading, I could feel a weird tightening in my chest and my breathing felt restricted slightly. Maybe I should've read this in the daytime and not in the dark early hours of the morning, because I had to go around turning all the lights in my apartment on. If your aim was to make your audience come away after reading this with a strong feeling or reaction, even a negative one, then you succeeded. I have to really compliment your writing, too. It is rare to find such wonderful first-person narrative story-telling. Even if someone isn't into horror, it can't be denied that you are an excellent writer. The way you organized the story made it flow nicely, too. Well, although this story left me in awe, I need to go read something with pink fluffy (and whole) bunnies to counteract the shaking in my hands now. :p Keep up the great writing! -- Lillith, Against Life |
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Dont let anyone lie to you, it wasn't funny at all. Not even with a warped sense of humor was it near funny. It made me want to toss the pc out my window. A funny story makes you laugh not gawk and wonder what the fuck the author was thinking by writing such trash. -- Anon, Bigger, Longer, Harder |
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I give you points for originality. But good Lord.... this was intended as crack, right? If not and you truly are a mod at IYFG... the last shred of me taking that place seriously has just gone down the toilet. With some of Sesshomaru's child "gerbils". At least that's what I could tell, as your description of his "fetish" is lacking in some key areas. Essentially Sessomaru gets his rocks off by shoving children up his ass? That's hilarious. There's dark and psychologically thrilling and disturbing, and then there's just gross, bizarre and comical. -- Anon, Gohatto |
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An Abraxas story without pointless or plotless gay sex, forced rape, torture, masochism, incest, bondage and domination, or bestiality. I’m slightly impressed; but only just. -- "Remmington", Good Twin, Evil Twin |
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....wow....I mean....holy-f-ing...wow...Good story to write right before Halloween!!!! That....was creepy. I've read a lot of your stuff and have to say I think this is the best. It gives off the air of some kind of psychological thriller novel. This is definitely the most...ingenious way I've seen an author deal with Jakotsu's obsession with Inuyasha. Hits kinda close to home, doesn't it? ;) Its just written well. Very well. The pace picks up faster and faster towards the end, you can sense the narrator getting more and more desperate...sense the descent into insanity....or is it?? Dude...the ending totally freaked me. I kinda jumped up from my desk and ran to the other side of the room and just stared at the computer. Well done!! -- tareacel, Love and Madness |
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Ah, so we finally found out his mission! In a way I'm glad he didn't use Koji, but killing the little boy was bad too.... but it was a good ending, and I think you got Kohaku's and Naraku's relationship dead-on. I believe that they would be like that if Kohaku was under Naraku's service for so long, and although the way you wrote it made it seem not so disturbing, it really is a sick kind of love they have for each other. Great work, and I hope you write more fics like this in the future!! -- Oboro, The Loyal Servant |
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I try to avoid giving harsh critisms because I know tastes varry but this is with out a doubt the worst story I have read, which considering how I felt about the Cue story is saying something. This is most pathetic self insertion I have ever seen. A good rule of thumb. DON'T PLUG YOUR FICS IN A FIC! Its not impressive its sickening. You even miss casted AGAIN. Jagara was a good guy, Malcar was evil, and not pathetically evil like the Mutants, he was so powerful Mumm-Ra even brought him back to life. If your going to write Tcat fan fics at least pout people on the right sides. And stop posting all over FF.net, almost every section I go to has your drival in it and it's the same damn stories, Xing has said not to do that because of how taxed the servers are. May a hundred snarfs nest in your underware if you ever do such a wretched thing again. PS: I have erected a monument to you alright, its a dartboard. -- Sickened Reader, Malcar's Insane |
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I had a friend of mine read this. I sat there and watched as he was reading it. All of a sudden he jumped up and his chair went flying behind him. I was rolling. He asked if the fucking chair was possessed? Finally he sat back down, and then he started pulling at his clothes as he was finishing it. I was laughing so hard. The look of terror on his face was priceless. *Wonders who else I can scar for life and have read this?* This story is beyond brilliant! -- Tainted, Ravager |
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The tatooing was, I hesitate to say this, sexy (how weird does that make me?) and wonderful, climatic and perfect for the story. But the way you portrayed the artistic soul was just great. It's very rare that you see a messed up Shippou, even though realistically that's the way he would turn out and I applaud you for the audacity and nerve it takes to make a beloved chibi character like Shippou into what's presented as a disturbed person. All in all An awesome fic!! Loved it! So different, so original! If i knew how, I would nominate this for an award. It's so good, it's just unbelievable. You should submit this with different character names to some magazine and see how it goes. awesome job!!! write more!! -- drake220, Shippo's Little Asymmetric Dragon |
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That was sick and wrong on so many levels. I think I am gonna throw up. Please never ever write ** like this again. -- Jozie, Weird Story in D |